Critique:
A cover title will help give context.
An interesting aesthetic and colour palette.
Unable to decipher the symbolism of the icons.
The spreads communicate there are 3 places but there needs to be clear differentiation between them.
For example The (page 1) In Good (page 2) Cosy Teahouse (page 3) are all treated similarly and infer part of the overall system, but they don’t really help the reader understand what you want them to know yet (which creates confusion).
Creating a systemised visual hierarchy will help.
The figure on page 2 doesn’t look as though they are in good company, or can offer good company.
The red also gives a sense of alarm to the imagery.
Another layer of information is needed.
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